C.J. Heck (August 10 / Born in Columbus OH - now lives in PA)

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Secret Room

A little room within my heart
has a door that wears a star
with a weathered name emblazoned there.
This is where you are.

It's not a large room, tucked away,
but where my soul can see
just where it is in case I need
a precious memory.

The door is safely closed now
for a time that's yet to come,
but when and if it does,
the door will melt away, my love.

C.J. Heck
Submitted: Monday, February 07, 2005


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  • Michael Witkowski (2/7/2005 10:09:00 AM)

    Nice, though not innovative nor inventive nor original imagery. Jerked at the chords of my mindsoul. Brims over with feeling. Nice!
    BW
    Michael Witkowski

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  • Michael Shepherd (2/7/2005 8:17:00 AM)

    since it's jokes day for me (did I not thunk of you this very day...) - glad you popped up again...

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  • Michael Shepherd (2/7/2005 8:14:00 AM)

    Oh that's so... so...sad (in the old sense of the word, full to the measure) and lovely (in the old sense of the word) ...thanks.

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  • David Nelson Bradsher (2/7/2005 8:00:00 AM)

    Nice to see another rhyming poet here. There don't seem to be many of us. I like this very much, C.J. Beautiful in its intended simplicity. Very straightforward.

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