Senryu - 129 Puppet Dance - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 129 Puppet Dance -

Rating: 5.0


Day in and day out
Life is a true puppet dance
till death stops this all.

Saturday, April 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 16 April 2016

So very true. We think we are in control but we are not

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Darren Jkoeryo 20 April 2016

Indeed a puppet dance... 10

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 18 April 2016

Fantabulous, then why this drama in between, thanks fir the share perfect 10

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Loke Kok Yee 18 April 2016

so much wisdom in three short lines, i love this senryu! thanks Asim-10

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Md Anisur Rahman 17 April 2016

Verily, Life is a drama like puppet dance.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 April 2016

Until death stops it all! Nice work.

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