Senryu: 501 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu: 501

Rating: ★5.0


two ignited hearts
like a pearl inside the shell
year glint in the eyes

M. Asim Nehal
Monday, January 4, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: cute love
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 January 2021

A wonderful senryu that beautifully depicts two hearts consumed by love. Well crafted with great imagery.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 05 January 2021

Heartful of love lives life of love

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Michael Jack 05 January 2021

Magic of love.

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Darren Jkoeryo 04 January 2021

DJ liked this sacred love hidden in pearly heart..

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Poetic Sky 12 January 2021

Superb haiku. I liked the theme.

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Suzon Albert 09 January 2021

Wonderful love in three lines.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 07 January 2021

I agree with Rajnishji's comment. That last line speaks volumes about your imaginative power.

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Rajnish Manga 07 January 2021

Love can be expressed in so many ways but every time you do it, it leaves its mark. Thanks, Asim ji.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 07 January 2021

I fully agree

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Varsha M 06 January 2021

You reminded me of bobby song in hindi... beautiful

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