Senryu - 68 (True Love) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 68 (True Love)

Rating: 5.0


The balloon of life
will hangs in air as long as
the true love exists.

Thursday, November 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanjukta Nag 06 November 2015

Another truthful senryu on true love. awesome.10+++

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Kelly Kurt 05 November 2015

Suspended by love. Nicely done, Mohammed

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Ari Alsio 05 November 2015

Well said balloon love, and when it explodes is useless to plead anyone back.

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Loke Kok Yee 05 November 2015

with such love life will not cease thanksAsim-10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2015

True love takes life up. This is definitely very interesting to express truth here. Very neat and wise Senryu shared here with interesting mind....10

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