Senryu - 85 Your Beauty Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 85 Your Beauty

Rating: 3.9


ocean waves frozen
by your beauty and a smile
and sea diminishes.

Monday, November 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: god,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 24 November 2015

Beauty of God well thought, Asim.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2015

Beauty and smile of sea draw interesting imagery in this tiny poem. Fantastic haiku shared here definitely. Wise sharing....10

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Kelly Kurt 24 November 2015

A lovely haiku. Thanks

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