Senryu - A Fight Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - A Fight

Rating: 5.0


shadow without soul
reality fighting dreams
life seems in doldrums

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Bradley 23 October 2020

Body without soul i heard but shadow without soul is new to me, you area cracker poet. Brilliant in terms of innovation

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Sebastian G 23 October 2020

What a fight between reality and dreams and soul is missing thats great.

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Deepak S S 23 October 2020

Melancholy song of life. Nicely written.

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Deepak S S 23 October 2020

Melancholy song of life. Nicely written.5**

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Gordon Walter 24 October 2020

1. Lifeless acts 2. Struggle 3. Tough situations.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2020

Life is amazing. Soul witnesses that every body produces shadow when it comes in contact with light. This poem is amazingly penned..5 stars.

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Suzon Albert 23 October 2020

Excellent one shadow without soul reality fighting dreams life seems in doldrums

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S H 23 October 2020

shadow without soul No light, no respite, no goals life seems in pothole....... what do you say?

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Darren Jkoeryo 23 October 2020

DJ salute to your imagination power. Brilliant! ! !

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