Senryu Beightol 12 Poem by Seamus O' Brian

Senryu Beightol 12



i'm falling awake
my hand finds the place you lay
nothing but the cold

Wednesday, December 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I literally awoke in the middle of the night and found these words. I memorized them and while driving had the memory of a dream.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 07 December 2016

FALLING AWAKE came barging through the curtain of my eyes, carrying its own tube of ink, and imprinted itself on my personal lexicon. The awakening is rude when hands are drawn to where warmth is no longer.

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Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

Galway, Ireland
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