Senryu Series - A Journey Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu Series - A Journey

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moon hides in blue mist
to test our patience in love,
heart illuminates

hiding in my heart
I desire to take your love
to eternal place.

playing hide and seek
life coerces to strange places
adventurous trips.

Tuesday, October 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2018

Under blue mist moon hides and shows beautiful face. Heart illuminates and love sparks tenderness. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.10

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M Asim Nehal 30 October 2018

Thanks Much, Sir. So kind of you, Always first to appreciate and give motivating comments.

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Mihaela Pirjol 31 October 2018

This Senryu Series proves that you are a master of the art! Bravo!

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Kelly Kurt 30 October 2018

A powerfully written series. Well done!

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Manonton Dalan 30 October 2018

A journey of life nicely described.10

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M Asim Nehal 24 January 2019

Thx Much Mononton D

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Sanjeev Narang 30 October 2018

A wonderful series. hiding in my heart I desire to take your love to eternal place.

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M Asim Nehal 02 November 2018

Thx Much Sanjeev

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 October 2018

every senryu is beautifully written on loving life - nice

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M Asim Nehal 30 October 2018

Thank u so much Mahtab...

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