among mount of sands
a single grain in your eyes
brings a teary storm
M Asim ---yes, sometimes the tiniest pinpricks sting the most ---very 5-star deserving
Magnificent Senryu adorned with superb imagery.So brilliantly crafted. To my Poem List.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes a grain can bring a big storm, Profound.