old men in the park
gnarled hands move dominoes
overhead leaves turn
Oh I have seen such scenes, u describe it so aptly and poetically in superb wording in senryu brevity wow. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled, saints and sinners/ordinary folks
Brilliant association of Imagery between hands and leaves. Top marks, Seamus
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I would like to translate this poem
I was about to say the same thing, and then I saw Tom's comment. The association is wonderful! It is fascinating, how much it can be expressed in just three lines!