Senryu: Tongue Tied Poem by David Wood

Senryu: Tongue Tied

Rating: 5.0


When a poet meets
Someone they become fond of
They are lost for words

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Senryu and Haiku's are 5 syllables first line,7 syllables second line and 5 syllables third line. A total of 17 syllables.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 26 November 2021

I would write this way: when a poet meets someone...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 November 2021

Brilliant expression.... appreciated and admired!

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Sandra Feldman 29 November 2021

Very clever! Some thoughts are so original, they live forever. And as Terry Thomas would say, ' Good show! ' we can start with humor today.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 27 November 2021

Yeah very true. I totally agree.5***

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Aarzoo Mehek 26 November 2021

Silence speaks million words

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 November 2021

It could be like this-when a poet meets someone he is fond of. I am not sure

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 November 2021

When poets meet.......makes it more precise. However, it's the poet's choice!

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