Senryu -Two♥'s Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu -Two♥'s

Rating: 5.0


two intertwined hearts
sharing secretive whispers
like melting glaciers

Senryu -Two♥'s
Thursday, August 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 20 August 2020

Let the glaciers melt let the secret whispers bear fruits Shirt and sweet senryu.10++

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Deepak S S 20 August 2020

Melting heart has many tales to narrate. Nice Senryu.

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Sharad Bhatia 20 August 2020

दो दिल मिल रहे हैं, . चुपके - चुपके Movie " Pardes" कि आज दो दिल को मिलने दो, आसमाँ मे चाँद को छिपने दो कर लेने दो प्यार की बातें उनको मोहब्बत से मोहब्बत करने दो बेहतरीन, बेहतरीन 10++

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S H 23 August 2020

The sound of melting glaciers is amusing in this poem.

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Juhaina Tumlu 23 August 2020

Loved it two intertwined hearts sharing secretive whispers like melting glaciers

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 August 2020

Through melting glaciers two hearts are amazingly sharing whisper with brilliance of mind. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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Darren Jkoeryo 22 August 2020

DJ liked it.10 on 10 for this poem and picture.

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Anjandev Roy 21 August 2020

like melting glaciers........fine.....thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

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