Senryu - Under Waxing Moon Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Under Waxing Moon

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under waxing moon
your love brightens up my heart
feeling full of life

Wednesday, January 20, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: blind love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zoyza Da Vinka 20 January 2021

Wow so well written, great imagery.

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Varsha M 20 January 2021

Waxing moon becoming life... awesome great sir.

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Ricky Manhatten 20 January 2021

Great imagery in your three lines.

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Deepak S S 20 January 2021

Love is truly blind and waxing is a great imagery.

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Rini Shibu 20 January 2021

Moon lit night and love both are good combination.. good one

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Michael Jack 21 January 2021

Moon and life runs parallel.

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Ram Kumar Mishra 21 January 2021

Awesome

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Profound love

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Mamta S 20 January 2021

Life dances around when moon is in heart, fabulous picture.

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Suzon Albert 20 January 2021

I agree with Rini, you are good at short love poems.

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