Sense Poem by Xiandara Magbanua

Sense

Rating: 4.8


Did you see?
The one you've been looking for,
Whom you keep on searching
A thousand times before,
Who keeps you in waiting?
Until the clock strikes four,
Then checking who's that someone
opening the door.

Did you hear?
The noise that keeps on
interfering your ear?
That keeps on telling
Be brave in facing,
your inscrutable fear.
Oh! Don't be frightened dear,
It's not you're your imagination,
But merely a hit of realization
that somehow you have to be strong,
in fighting what you think is not at all wrong.

Did you feel?
The tap of cold breeze on your shoulder,
which made you to remember
the 30th night of December.
When you thought
There's a thing called "forever"
but it only add up to your heart's somber.

It is all just a reminder
of your senior years,
when someone render
a promise that seems so true
but somehow,
it's just a simple piece of broken vow.

My dear,
is it not yet clear?
That this world is trying to offer,
two choices that too hard to bear,
a lifetime sufferer
or an agony survivor.

So now I'll ask you
Did you see?
Did you hear?
or did you feel?
The answer to your endless prayer.

Friday, August 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: memories
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is for that guy who deceived my innocent heart. Wherever you are now, be happy 'cause I already gave up resenting you.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 12 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Xiandara. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 August 2017

two choices that too hard to bear, a lifetime sufferer or an agony survivor. giving up resenting is a great spiritual step. be happy wherever you are...... thank you for this spiritual poem which may influence many towards goodness and God. tony

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