Sense Of Failure Poem by Melissa Patty

Sense Of Failure

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No matter how much I try
Always falls to pieces and I question why
My hope and ambition of achieving great things
Is that sense of failure I feel all my life brings
All i want is to be free from my inner world of pain
To be strong and try again
I know its hard to get back up and start a new foundation
Anything is possible if only I let my wall down with my hurt and frustration
Nothing prepares to be let down especially if its all you desire
Determination is a step that shows you don't give up easy no matter how much it may require
Although failure takes you a long and confusing place
Just know that to achieve big failure is an unfortunate step you have to face

Failure makes you feel worthless and lost
Its hard but get back up because life comes at so much cost

By Melissa Patty

Monday, September 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: failure
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 05 September 2016

Not failure, low aim is crime. Rejuvenate hopes for success and mount a fresh assault on the tough looking target. Ultimately success will be yours.

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Melissa Patty 14 September 2016

Thankyou for your soothing advice!

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