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Seperation

We walk this earth blind
without seeing what is really there
every step we take, premeditated
if we try to look what is inside
without limiting ourselves from everything
we do, step outside of just being
and swim into the current
of the spirit

How can we stop our selves from
this pattern we have build
brick by brick with our own hands
created a wall and now we dwell within it
not able to climb this height in which
we have grown to believe
why space in between what we make
why can it be opened like all that is around us
that we destroy by our own kind
when disease invades our bodies we feel hopeless
in search for cure,
why is it that we have done this to our selves
in such separation from the truth.

Submitted: Wednesday, July 18, 2012


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  • Valerie Dohren (7/19/2012 3:22:00 PM)

    We need to reach into higher realms to escape our self-made confines. Lovely work.

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  • Hari Smith Holms (7/19/2012 11:17:00 AM)

    Profound thought.It's right once wall is built between two loving hearts, it's tough to break it. Loved it Kasi--Nil

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  • Hari Smith Holms (7/19/2012 11:14:00 AM)

    Profound thought.The wall between the two looving hearts once built can't get broken.This is the tragedy of separation.Loved it Kasi.--Nil.

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  • Hamid Negah (7/19/2012 9:57:00 AM)

    Dear Kasia Fedyk nice writting it is the truth of our life and we should destroy like these walls.

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  • Eric Cockrell (7/18/2012 7:22:00 PM)

    all seperation and distance be but an illusion created by our fearing egos!

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