Mrs. Cynosure (May 17 1987 / Junction City Oregon)

An interesting depiction of sex addiction. I like it!

wow.an amazing job.i like the way u depicted sex addicts. keep it up! !

i really enjoyed this poem...thank you 4 sharing!

Bare facts truthfully depicted. Cowards dare not try such confessions. Come what may you are a victor. This is maniacal tendencies of the sub-conscious. A syndrome for hyper
active sexual urge. There are millions who undergoes such trauma every moment...
And there is one School of Thought.. viz.the catharsis or the bliss you derive from the action is a sample/ replica of the rapture experienced in Heaven. A great poem undoubtedly true to the core.and also true portrayal of the mind...well done... cheers

I really enjoy reading this poem. It's amazing the way you expressed it.

Self control and self confidence advisable....nice poem

like this poem.. you are picturing a reality. so many suffers like this and u brought it to limelight. thank u for sharing.

To F.J.R, ever heard of poetic license? A good poem pours forth from the heart like this one and doesn't need perfect spelling or grammar!

Becca, you have an imaginative mind, and i think the potential to hone that popetic element, and raise it to the next level. That said, and with all respectful genuine constructive criticism....Your spelling and grammar are either suffering from woeful deficiency or blatant laziness....Awriter cannot succeed if they cannot embrace the simplest of basic grammar. Poor spelling is a simple fix, called''Spellcheck'', or Webster's Dictionary. Read your contemporary Poet's, and practice writing simple free-verse in your spare time. Good Luck, young lady, and stop rigging your daily stats on this poem!

FjR

The Sharon Olds version is way better.