Shadow Poem by Francesca Lam

Shadow

Rating: 4.5


Shouting out your name
Waiting for your sweet gentle response
All I could hear was nothing but the rain

Looking for your shadow
Hoping that you would be here somewhere
All I could see was nothing but your photo

Dreaming of you all night long
Wishing that I could get to know you more
All I could do is watching your shadow fading away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Nice poem, dear poet Francesca Lam. You play with the light and the dark, which is not an easy theme for a poet. Very dramatic end 'shadow fading away..(see my poem The Widow) '. You have a gift, I give you a 9+, and wish you soon a 10! ! Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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