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Shine O Sun Shine

Shine o sun, shine on
The earth and on me.
Shine on land, on trees,
Shine here smilingly.

Come out, pulling the,
Curtain of dark cloud.
Damp is the weather,
For the blackish shroud.

Pools are always full,
Grey look, took the sky.
We want to be basked,
To make this place dry.

Trees are now tired,
As they bathed all day.
Birds nests very wet,
For you, we must pray.

The shutters are all down,
Muddy are lanes, roads.
Ponds became playground,
Of frogs and their toads.

Water-logged people are,
Totally helpless.
Appear Sun God,
Give ray and do bless.

Submitted: Friday, July 20, 2012
Edited: Saturday, July 21, 2012


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(For my friends who are tired of rain)

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  • Valerie Dohren (7/21/2012 1:43:00 PM)

    There are so many poems about rain around at the moment - has everyone emigrated to the UK! ! Seriouslly though Nil, this is a lovely poem.

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  • Kasia Fedyk (7/21/2012 11:34:00 AM)

    Always beautiful as the sun rays! May it shine upon you. I love it Nila.

  • Vipins Puthooran (7/21/2012 10:48:00 AM)

    Pools are full,
    Grey is the sky.
    We want to bask,
    To make us dry//////
    Really a wonderful poem! ! ! ! ! top marksss! !

  • Thomas A Robinson (7/20/2012 12:18:00 PM)

    A physical and spiritual poem

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