ctrade,
Insecurity is an enemy
An enemy that is hard to beat
It’s a battle between her
And the woman inside her
It separates her from the crowd
“Them” seeing her as so proud
“Them” seeing her as a loner
With no damn good character
Oh, please tell her what to do
For she doesn’t have a clue
To beat the inner side of her
So “them” and “her” will be together
20.08.06
I don't think anyone can give you an answer. But one thing I can tell you- don't ever feel insecure about your poetry! I think it is excellent! This poem is a ten.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i would ask her to love herself...for her she is the most important thing on earth...as she learns to love herself others will love her...love...nalini