$$$siblings Whom Steal$$$ Poem by is it poetry NO its not

$$$siblings Whom Steal$$$

Rating: 2.7


Ever had a bro?
What about a sis?
Danger Will Robinson Danger, I have 3
They spend their days consumed with guilt
All the while creating another deceitful Quilt
Pretending to be something their not!
While the lone sibling see's their hearts full of Rot!
Do not do I, Yourn a piece of trash and my mind
won't Sway and I bet you this I won't go away
I spit at your feet and laugh in your face, all three
are lyers, thieves and full of disgrace-
You Bowrey Boy, WILL take it on the chin,
I'll see you in Hell from outside looking IN!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 26 September 2009

Well, it would be pietry if it were not for all the redundant symbols and the spelling mistakes. I would not point this out were it not that every poem I have read of yours is replete with these errors. It makes for difficult reading and cuts the enjoyment of the poem. This is not necessary because you need only take it into WORD and the spellchecker will show you the correct spelling. Adeline

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