Signs Of Redemption Poem by George Krokos

George Krokos

George Krokos

Samos, Greece (Now lives in Melbourne, Victoria, Australia)

Signs Of Redemption

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The fragrant flowers in the garden
do speak to me of nature's pardon
that she has again granted us all
tho it seems we're letting her fall.

The many colours of the rainbow
are surely a sign to me somehow
that whatever we may each do right
will help us all to walk in the light.

When the weather comes in due season
and the elements play within our reason
if there has been nothing done to regret
or anything that we would rather forget.

If we experience peace on a daily basis
and speak kind words to all other faces
with some wisdom and a pleasant smile
that we're not taken to show them guile.

In ways we help each other in trouble
and alleviate pain whenever we're able
just by giving someone a helping hand
especially those finding it hard to stand.

When we see the good in each other
and treat everyone else like a brother
not withholding any right exemption
we are showing signs of redemption.

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Thursday, September 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: elements,nature,reason,redemption
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There are certain signs which can be observed that tell or convey of peoples redemption.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 01 September 2016

Absolutely right. Hats off! : When we see good in each other and treat every one else like a brother not withholding any right exemption we are showing signs of redemption Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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George Krokos 02 September 2016

Thanks for reading and your comments yet once again Sir.

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Dawn Smith 01 September 2016

A very good poem. Thanks.

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George Krokos 02 September 2016

Thanks for reading and your comments Dawn.

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Samos, Greece (Now lives in Melbourne, Victoria, Australia)
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