maitreyee joshi

Rookie - 0 Points (5 january)

#silence - Poem by maitreyee joshi

Last time we met
I spoke my heart out
I laid my soul bare
My eyes searching
My ears intent to hear
I knew icould swear
I asked for nothing more
Only, faith for faith
Loyalty fof loyalty
And respect for respect
But i could only perceive silence
I thought sound can wound
But silence can be peircing
Silence can be excruciating
Silence can hound
Wounds do heal with time
But the scars remain
The pain is gone
But the numbness still bothers
And the silence still prevails

Comments about #silence by maitreyee joshi

  • Rookie rago rago (7/10/2009 10:50:00 PM)

    silence always express deep in thoght and deep in emotions......... (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,392 Points Indira Renganathan (6/13/2009 10:03:00 AM)

    Silent expression of a painful love...well done Maitreyee (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karanvir Kataria (5/30/2009 2:03:00 AM)

    silence remains silence

    dont have words to describe my feelings for u poem...
    i will say only that....i thought
    as u written for me....
    for the silence of her to whom i am trying to listen her silence...
    but i cant..
    at last as u told
    its pirecing..
    thanx for sharing ue poem mam (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vinod Ak (3/25/2009 9:05:00 AM)

    Simply superb! Thanks for sharing this awesome poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 169 Points Lakshmi Venkataraman (3/23/2009 9:18:00 PM)

    condensed...... with high poetic grace...... very nice! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (3/14/2009 1:55:00 PM)

    Lovely written words filled with loving ink, great poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie anurag duggal (3/10/2009 1:40:00 AM)

    alovely poem indeed would love to read morer of thsi deep romantic stuff :)) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 7, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 24, 2009

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