Silence Poem by kat remz

Silence

Rating: 5.0


i don't trust myself
i cant be left alone

i can't be trusted in a state like this
the dark over flowing in my mind

it's to silent, no matter how much noise
It's too quite, & dark

No light, No sound
No life

Everyone's gone and i'm alone
My breath echoes off the wall's

Not enough oxygen to keep me alive
If i don't get out i won't make it

'let me out' i screamed
No reply

Just emptyness
alone, No Hope

Now i'm
Gone

Monday, July 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 18 July 2016

An insightful depiction of life in its lowest ebb - good portrayal of acute depression and loss of sunlight in one's life, well articulated and nicely penned in good diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Kat.

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Ash Sri 18 July 2016

Nice poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 July 2016

Everyone's gone and i'm alone My breath echoes off the wall's......loneliness and sadness and depressive tendencies expressed in a creative way. thank you for your creative talent........ tony

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