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Aldo Kraas

(July 15 1964 / Sao Paulo Brazil)

SILENCE IN THE SKY


Silence in the sky
Silence in the sky
Silence in the sky
I don't hear any sound at all
Not even a sound of the birds
Silence in the sky
Silence in the sky
Silence in the sky
I don't even hear the sound of the Airplane flying in the sky
Silence in the sky
Silence in the sky
Silence in the sky
It is quiet like a dead man
All the black clouds hang in the sky
That sky is dark
It make's me want to go to slep just when I look at it
But there is no light
It feels like five in the morning
But it is not
I can say that it just feels that way to me
Dead men's winter
It is so cold
If you don't wear the proper clothes you can catch a cold and even catch pneumonia
And will have to be transported to a hospital
Where you will be treated for this cold and pneumonia
Hospital is not a nice place
But it is there when you need it

Submitted: Monday, October 02, 2006
Edited: Thursday, October 07, 2010

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  • Brianne Lindline (9/25/2008 6:56:00 PM)

    -laughing histerically- i love how you changed the topic there....silence in the sky to hospitals not being a nice place..... (Report) Reply

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