Silent Motion Poem by Joseph Narusiewicz

Silent Motion

Rating: 5.0


Traces of a riverbed
A wilderness of self
Slow unemotional branches
Passion seems like a conclusion

I await for you like a camel
My contentment interrupted by guilt
Beautiful woman like a cardinal
Cognitive recognition gets old

Defined by the past like a dream
Come visit me in my logical womb
The counselor looks at her watch
Another day of silent motion

Friday, January 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: despair
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 27 January 2018

Joseph, the message is loud and clear...10+++

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 26 January 2018

Impressive workmanship, Joseph...Crisp, tight structural movement throughout...despair comes in a potpourri of conditions...You coverage was succinct yet quite compendious...~FjR'18~

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Joseph Narusiewicz

Joseph Narusiewicz

So St Paul, Minnesota
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