Silver Waves Poem by KAVIN CHARALAN

Silver Waves

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Flowing water brook you see
Sparkling silver water waves are sparkling you see
In sparkling silver waves you see the jumping fish
Jumps my heart to drink the water

This is English rendering of my Tamil White pa (Venpa) :

பாய்ந்து வரும்நீரோ டைதன்னில் பாராய்
பளிச்சிட்டு வெள்ளியாய் நீரலைகள் மின்னுதே
மின்னிடும் நீரலையில் துள்ளுதே மீன்கள்
பருகிட துள்ளுதே நெஞ்சு
- -இன்னிசை வெண்பா


VEN means WHITE; PA means Poem - -WHITE POEM
White here means the grammatical purity of its form.
This perfect pure poetry never allows relaxation of its
basic pure grammar rules.
This WHITE POEM is as immaculate as White LILLY Flower

Sunday, February 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: waves
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kanniappan Kanniappan 27 February 2016

You bring the scene of flowing brook nicely before our eyes. Thank you.

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Souren Mondal 14 February 2016

A very well written poem Kavin.. The imagery is beautiful.. Thanks for sharing..

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