Sitting Remittent Poem by Craig Turner

Sitting Remittent

Rating: 5.0


Its sad that you stand out as a good guy,
Amongst the repentant and vengeful,
You know your blue,
Scattered through fields of red,
Biting your tongue,
Just to torture your head.

You know I'll fight if you give me a chance too,
Peaceful and restrained,
Be strong If we have too,
Pushing our bodies away from our brains,
A question mark floats,
Only the shadow remains.

Ten minutes of justification,
To people who never really knew,
You stand there in mind but your not your thoughts,
Sitting remittent.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Abdullah 23 June 2009

You know your blue, Scattered through fields of red, Biting your tongue, Just to torture your head. Fine lines.... Love it....

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Sara Tehrani 04 June 2009

ur a talented writer, i love this, its really got sum powerful imagery, sharp, clever and to the point..... oh and is this the craig turner that i Know? lol :)

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