Six Pack Poem by Jim Norausky

Six Pack

Rating: 4.3


Looking through the keyhole of an aluminum moon.

Sometimes laughing, sometimes depressed.

Many years caressing the notion,

That life is better when the potion is not suppressed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Your first line is extremely original. I doubt whether anyone else could ever think this one up. Witty and wise! 10 Karin Anderson

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Fiona Davidson 31 January 2009

So much expression in so few words Jim...excellent poem...like it...Fi...10++

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Kevin Wells 03 July 2008

So much said with such economy. And I understand exactly where you're coming from! I would probably take a page to express what you've just said in four lines! Brilliant!

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