*trying Poem by Jim Norausky

*trying

Rating: 2.6


I don't give a damn first order

as events sweep around the world

as long as my family survives.

Then I'll help in any way possible

for we are family of mankind

in humanity's album

with each snapshot

impressed on our soul

begging for relief saying

help me.

Yes.

How?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahmad Shiddiqi 04 April 2009

full of strength and determination! straightforward to all our hearts! I love it. keep writing!

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Fiona Davidson 31 March 2009

This is such an honest write Jim...wonderful read thanks...Fi 10+++

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Kevin Wells 24 March 2009

The one constant with humanity is that it will not help itself. It stands by and watches the Earth die around it. Politicians are motivated to help only by greed, the church preaches peace and love, rarely practicing what they preach. You raise valid points here, Jim. Unfortunately, I got no answers.

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Sandra Fowler 22 March 2009

Distinctive phrases and profound thoughts. You are a fine wordsmith. Warm regards, Sandra

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