Slammed Poem by Sandra Feldman

Slammed

Rating: 5.0


"That hand,
I searched for
All my life,
That smile
I never had"
Said
The frustrated,
Lover
As clouds began
To gather,
And dreams
No longer swam
In the lakes
Of hidden passions.

All had died
In one last sigh
As Night
Gave Life's door,
A great big slam!
Without, compassion.

Thursday, September 5, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: despair
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 12 September 2019

Life is truly frustration-fraught. Let despair pass us by and let’s hope for the better. A well crafted composition, dear Ma’am Sandra...10++++

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Kostas Lagos 06 September 2019

Impressive poem, fascinating expressions

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Prabir Gayen 06 September 2019

All had died, In one last sigh, As Night Gave Life's door A great big slam! Without, compassion.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 September 2019

A poignant write. Yes, sometimes life is like that. Without compassion. Delivers us to nothingness. A vivid portrayal of great despair. Superb imagery.

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