Slip Away Poem by Carrie Everett

Slip Away

Rating: 4.8


What do you do when your life is slipping away?
when so much has happpened?
And there's nothing you can say
And there's nothing yu can do
Your life has gone so wrong
And you dont know where you belong
Everywhere you go
You are alone
There's no trusting left
You've stopped talking to friends
So there is no loose ends
And there is no heartbreaks
No more rewinds and retakes
You are just alone and safe
And no one can hurt you
And there is no pain
And you let yur life just slip away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
[[Sonia ♥ ]] 19 May 2006

...: ♥ ...: Wow. i really like that poem. its freaking awesum! <33 good job. keep ur head up! : X

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Brian Dorn 19 May 2006

Carrie, sometimes it's easier to build a shelter and not let anyone in... you certainly have less chance of getting hurt. But, isolation brings no joy and that's when life slips away. Excellent write! ! Brian

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Carrie Everett

Carrie Everett

Memphis, Tennessee
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