Would that a deliverer looks our way
Would that a helper descends this day
This dawns face too smeared in blood
Home again marred by piles of mud
Had yet to flourish, those tender flowers
Beastly hands snatched from bowers
Blooming innocent smiling faces
Early skipped to school in races
Giggles laughter and their Smile
Writhe and throe in death defile
We are rent, with slash and gore
Our Backs bent, above vultures soar
O wake up people! O wake up now!
Stem the deeds of fiendish hands!
O wake up people! O wake up now!
Let's rid our home of terror bands!
Books in hands, their quills too
Rainbow dreams, what they would do
Soiled in carmine all those roses
What the resolve of bloodied noses
Where the moms shall find their pearl
Or the themes of their visions unfurl
Dearer than life those bits of being
Stony eyes now snatched of seeing
Giggles laughter and their Smile
Writhe and throe in death defile
We are rent, with slash and gore
Our backs bent, above vultures soar
O wake up people! O wake up now!
Stem the deeds of fiendish hands!
O wake up people! O wake up now!
Let's rid our home of terror bands!
O wake up people! O wake up now! Stem the deeds of fiendish hands! O wake up people! O wake up now! Let's rid our home of terror bands! A very good heartfelt poem on massacre of innocent children at Peshawar.Well expressed. Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
I feel sad, my heart is bleeding for those innocent children who died helpless.For vengeance lay all unto God... Wake up people.wake up now
It's so sad what's the world is passing trough really its shameful and terrible situation terrorists wars and what for all these aches and wars and how pity that those who are most effected from this tragedies are the innocent people children and the poor people they already are not aware what's going on.not diplomats or terrorists or or they are trying to survive in peace but unfortunately it seems impossible in our days.. Great poem that talks about what's going on the world nowadays shameful and heartbreaking truths what's going on world. I wish a mericle happens I guess we are in need of a merical!
This is absolutely devastating, I am so sad about the cruelty that has taken place. This poem is a beautiful depiction of truth and honouring the innocent who lost their lives. You're right, the world needs to wake up. Thank you for such thought provoking words.
Deeply heart-rending and poignant poem. Conveys the horrors of that incident clearly. Very well written.
after the murdering of so many innocent people in Paris, on November 13th,2015, a publishing project came about... I gave it the title: ‘POETRY AGAINST TERROR’, as a tribute to the countless victims of terror, worldwide. I invited many poets, whom poetry can be read at PoemHunter, to join me, so to write an ebook together. The book, which is an anthology of poetry, is a compilation of poems written by 64 poets from 42 different countries from all over the world. THEIR NAMES, in alphabetical order: ________________________ Sayeed Abubakar, Bangladesh Alexandro Acevedo Johns, Chile Saadat Tahir Ali, Pakistan (KSA) Paul Amrod, USA (Germany) Leah Ayliffe, Canada Khaoula Basty, Tunisia Lawrence Beck, USA Daniel J. Brick, USA Sophy Chen, China Terence George Craddock, New Zealand Sahra Hussein Dahir, Somalia Driss Ezzireg, Morocco Geoffrey Fafard, Australia Weiyao Feng, China Grant Fraser, UK Fabrizio Frosini, Italy Negar Gorji, Iran Bright Kwamina Grantson, Ghana Dilantha Gunawardana, Sri Lanka Nosheen Irfan, Pakistan Galina Italyanskaya, Russia Afrooz Jafarinoor, Iran Farzad Jahanbani, Iran Vincent Chizoba John, Nigeria Kinyua Karanja, Kenya Sofia Kioroglou, Greece Varghese Kuncheria, India (Oman) Kelly Kurt, USA Lionel Lerch aka Cocteau Mot Lotov, France Birgit Linder, Germany (HK) Tapera Makadho, Zimbabwe Kenneth Maswabi, Botswana Denzel Mbatha, South Africa Mallika Menon, India Leloudia Migdali, Greece Asoke Kumar Mitra, India Zoran Mitrović (Neran Sati) , Croatia Istvan Molnar, Sweden Souren Mondal, India Anitah Muwanguzi, Uganda Bharati Nayak, India Valsa George Nedumthallil, India Srijana Neupane (KC) , Nepal Eunice Barbara Novio, Philippines (Thailand) Fatima Obaid, Pakistan Marcondes Pereira, Brazil Sajee Rayaroth, Australia Marianne Larsen Reninger, USA Terry Robinson (HE George) , UK Rizwan Saleem, Pakistan (UAE) Leila Samarrai, Serbia Kirti Sharma, India Anzylyne Shideshe, Kenya (Germany) Osiel Silverino da Silva, Brazil Pamela Sinicrope, USA Petra Soliman, Egypt (GCC) Douglas Stewart, USA Udaya R. Tennakoon, Sri Lanka (Switzerland) Richard Thézé, UK (Germany) Savita Tyagi, USA Mai Venn, Ireland Niken Kusuma Wardani, Indonesia Snir Yacoby, Israel Asma Zenjali, Morocco __________________ I wish, here, to say ''thank you'' to each of them. And also to the poet-friends in the editorial board with me: Daniel Brick, Pamela Sinicrope, Richard Thézé. Daniel and Pam, together with Leila Samarrai and Valsa George Nedumthallil, wrote a commentary to each and every poem. Our ebook will be published first at Amazon, on December 20. Then at Smashwords.com (at the end of March 2016) where everybody will be able to download the book free
1 year ago (16 Dec.2014) more than 140 students and staff were killed, many of them executed at point-blank range by gunmen who also detonated bombs around the school buildings.. A sad anniversary.. but we all have to remember. Your poem resonates inside minds and hearts
Love the title! It sends a clear and strong message before the reader even starts with a poem. There is clear and fluid rhythm which emphasizes strong emotions in the poem. In addition, the poem is filled with a central image of pain and grief. I love how you incorporate it without hatred. I especially loved this part: Stony eyes now snatched of seeing It send such a powerful image to audience. Keep up the good work. It's always a pleasure reading your poems!
O wake up people! O wake up now! Stem the deeds of fiendish hands! O wake up people! O wake up now! Let's rid our home of terror bands! A powerful exhortation to the people of the world to get united as a band and oust terrorism from the face of the Earth! Reinstating of peace on Earth be our New year resolution! Great write with powerful diction!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Such a massacre of innocentes lives (a shameful, meaningless, cruel carnage) recalls those words by Conrad: The horror! The horror! (J. Conrad, Heart of Darkness) . [Wake up people], you say -and you're right. But it seems far too many prefer looking the other way..