Smile Poem by Haley Dawn

Smile

Rating: 4.3


I put on a smile everyday but I really don’t feel like smiling at all I acutely feel like crying I feel like giving up I don’t know why I cant seem to get over this feeling inside me but its eating away at my stomach it kills me to see you with some one else it kills me to hear some one else tell you that they love you it kills me to see you in someone else’s arms it kills me to know that I have to let go but it has to be done so ill walk away with only the sound of my tears but you must know every tear I shed is shed for you I loved you with every thing I had with every bone in my body I said it before and ill say it again you my one true love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poison 9901 01 October 2007

Haley Dont give up on love so quick, and dont be so hard on yourself. Your only fifteen, and yes you have endured more than most, but that has only made you stronger. Hell, I'm 48, and I just found true love 8 years ago. So dont give up and never settel for second best, you deserve so much more. Very nice read, full of emotions. I give you a 10 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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