Snow Poem by Elizabeth Wrobel

Snow

Rating: 5.0


When snow falls,
The winter calls.
Time for snowmen to be built,
Time for sledding down the hill,
Making angels in the snow,
Making white fluffy balls to throw.
Then by the end of the day,
As the light begins to slip away,
The day becomes darker and the wind colder too,
You think of the hot chocolate waiting at home for you.

Snow
Thursday, February 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,season,snow,winter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This was the very first poem I wrote.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 07 April 2020

Then by the end of the day, As the light begins to slip away, The day becomes darker and the wind colder too, You think of the hot chocolate waiting at home for you. hot chocolate waiting for you on cold winter days. fine feeling.. tony

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Ziaeddin Torabi 10 January 2020

The contrast between snow(winter) and hot(chocolate) shows that from beginning, you have good talent.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 February 2015

When snow falls winter calls. Really beautiful words of nature comes in poem. Nicely penned.

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Godfrey Morris 19 February 2015

For your first well done. The poem is relatable and has rhythm

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