So Close Poem by Ryan Leonard

So Close

Rating: 4.5


Westward we head
In search of surf and sun
We ran faster
Stretched further
But the same cross looms.
The current coming in
Leaving friends far behind
Our messiah long lost,
So close to joy.
Light fades into what?
Better men know.
If only I cared

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Autumn Jones 17 August 2009

I like it. It flows smooth and isn't two long. Asks good questions. Nice. I give it a 9.

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~ Jon London ~ 27 July 2009

Well done Ryan.....penned with flow of life's colour and feeling...keep expressing

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