So Deep, For Keeps. Poem by Deluke Muwanigwa

So Deep, For Keeps.

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So deep, for keeps.

In my mind are several compartments
Dedicated to my commitment
To you, for you

Right compartment is full
Things i need to get for you
To make you happy, make you peppy

Left side is for memories of you
Good times we spent together
In the park, in the dark

Top section is for the future
Things i want to do with you
Our kids, our needs

The bottom is bottomless
Where i keep my love for you
So deep, for keeps.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 07 February 2021

Beautifully written love poem.

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Captain Cur 07 February 2021

Very well organized and original poem, compartmentalized to a beautiful whole!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 February 2021

Pure Poetic Magic!

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Kostas Lagos 06 February 2021

Well crafted poem!

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Varsha M 05 February 2021

This is really a beautiful expression so well woven and nicely penned. As i read your poem i was reminded of right and left hemisphere of brain and their functions. Beautiful

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