So Far Away Poem by NIght Rain

So Far Away

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With wings so old and broken
How do you live the ground?
When the worlds holding you down,
lifes got you stuck.
So teaterd and torn
lookin for a way up.
Maybe just a way out.
Felling so alone,
like your glued to the ground

So useless and broken down,
fellling so worthless,
like you mean nothing.
With wings so broken and old

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When i started wrighting this it made me think of my dad, he was 50 years old still got up and worked evey day now he never had an easy job but he did it eveyday. He got stuck in the place he didn't like and he didn't know how to fly like he once did.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eindaray Kyaw 27 September 2012

You are so dutiful daughter..fri..I appreciate this Great...job

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