So Many Questions..... Poem by Ashok Sethi

So Many Questions.....

Rating: 3.5


How come Im alone?
How come no one likes me?
Iwish I knew the answers
I wish I knew how to fix it
I wonder what's wrong
Day in and day out
What do I need to do different?
How do I need to act?
Should I be someone else?
Or should I just give up?
But that's not my nature
I'm a fighter Not a snail
That crawls into my shell
How come I want to hide?
How come I want to run?
I want to get away,
Far away from here
Where no one knows me
And no one will judge me
Is there such a place?
I don't think there is
But one can always hope....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Guess Who 16 October 2012

\Nice poem rich of words....... well to be honest with you the meaning is good but it's not well written would've loved if you put some rhymes at least so the reader doesn't go so sleepy your poem is good but it could've been improved... - But one can always hope.... very beautiful expression loved it Keep the good work up didn't mean to be rude you're good keep it up Guess Who

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Ashok Sethi

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Jharsuguda, Orissa, India
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