Solitary Freedom Poem by Nika McGuin

Solitary Freedom



If freedom is a lone vagabond
unblocked, free-willed
can freedom if found alone
truly bring happiness?

The freedom of one
may never be parallel
to the freedom of two

You can do as you please
but what good are the things you do
if they're always done alone?
One begins to wonder

Alone and content:
that is the best state
of solitary freedom

Content is nice and all
but we know the scale
tips quite a bit, from
contentment to happiness

Friday, August 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,freedom
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 September 2018

very nice and unique ideas miss poet ur an upcoming freedom poet not many poets are made by schooling so many are born naturally you are such a one young one a poet of today and maybe of tomorrow as it comes as another today...VERY deep imagery really as I read ur comment o he pyramids I rote this miss..The pyramid does win as another one will come and say a different thing if u study the PYRAMIDS as I do you.........]]]] read on more please

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