Solitude's Whistle Poem by Nikunj Sharma

Solitude's Whistle

Rating: 3.8


Loneliness to solitude
Spans the kingdom of silence
Its path bathed in the golden hue
Of restrained compliance …

One end dark;
The other illuminated.
The distance not yet calibrated;
On a measurable scale.
One hinges on myopia;
The other encourages to exhale.

A moment is enough
to enlighten and
To render the self a glow
So take a step towards the worthy end
Solitude’s whistle you blow.


30 June 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Bhowmick 30 June 2009

A moment is enough to enlighten and To render the soul a glow So take a step towards the worthy end Solitude’s whistle you blow. lovely penned the words...

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Ken E Hall 01 July 2009

A haunting poem with a great thought line enjoyed this poem very much..Solitude Silence well done +++++10 regards.

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I really like the middle stanza! Nicely written.

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Indira Babbellapati 08 July 2009

that's the time when one feels whole...

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Surya . 06 July 2009

solitude is an oppertunitity to think up on god.very nice poem surya

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Indira Renganathan 05 July 2009

Beautiful....the value of solitude well said....last stanza is golden....congrats

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Howard Kern 02 July 2009

very nice, keeping solititude from turning to lonleyness.10

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