indira babbellapati

Rookie - 70 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Some Senryus - Poem by indira babbellapati

When world begins to
Crumble down can human
Effort salvage it?

When a rainbow
Decides to bloom on night’s cheek
Can any stop it?

When clouds choose to drift
Can any wind bring them back
To where it’s needed?

When tears trickle
Down eyes of thickening night
Does the sun matter?

21jul2010
11.22hrs


Comments about Some Senryus by indira babbellapati

  • Rookie - 94 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (7/27/2010 11:17:00 AM)

    No 1 ~ can human/Effort salvage it? ~ GOK* LOL
    No 2 ~ Rainbow has kissed my lips not cheeks LOL
    No 3 ~ Yeah Cloud of Mind drifts many hears [non textual comments]
    No 4 ~ ‘When tears trickle’ ~ it matters Million $ lol
    Excellent reading ride Ma’am… thanks for sharing …
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10
    *GOK ~ God only knows
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 21, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, July 30, 2010


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