Some Stupid Thoughts That I Must Purge Poem by Mary Nagy

Some Stupid Thoughts That I Must Purge



I like my chocolate hot
when my pizza's cold.

I like my sheets new
when my quilts are old.

I like the music fast
when my kisses are slow.

You make me feel high
when I'm feeling low.

I enjoy little ditties
and elaborate songs.

I like my poems short
but my stories long.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 16 December 2005

I'll apologize now for this not being a wonderful poem...........but, I've been repeating these stupid lines in my head all day and thought this would be the only way to rid myself of them so I can get my head clear for some ''real'' poems. :) Thanks for reading it anyways. Sincerely, Mary

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Uriah Hamilton 16 December 2005

Mary, this is a real poem becuase life is real, silly, sad, lonely, meaningful, everything is real, truth just has to be expressed.

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earyt etr 16 December 2005

Anything can be a wonderful poem, and this isnt just anything. Once again, Congrats! ! \m/ Adam \m/

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Brian Dorn 19 September 2006

Mary, I like my poems short as well... and btw, yours are just right! Brian

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Duncan Wyllie 21 March 2006

I just love your words.

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Ernestine Northover 17 December 2005

And I like your poems Mary, this is a cute one. Love Ernestine XXX

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***** ********* 17 December 2005

Lovely poem Mary, just shows us how complicated we really are! 10 from smiling Tai

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Joseph Daly 17 December 2005

Brilliant piece Mary. Sums up our unconcious preferences really well and leaves the reader panting for an answer. There really isn't one I suppose. love Denis Joe

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