Last night
as I silently
slept
into my dreams
you genlty
crept.
Recalling
times when you
were there
life was breezy
without a care.
Loving you
from the time we
met
walking together
in the sunset.
Knowing your warm
tender embrace
is something time
cannot erase.
Pledging once more
my love to you
when I awoke the
dream was through.
Well said and so enjoyable. Read mine - O Dearest Love - Adeline
Dreams can be such nebulous and fleeting things; don't you wish sometimes you could order up the dream you will have that night? I really like this poem. It makes me remember a time when I was young and could have had a similar dream..thanks for writing it.
A dream of a dream love and past, it makes the reader want him to be there for you, nice to read...regards
This is the first one of your poems I have had the deep honor and plesant surprise to read. I can see now that I am in for hours of splendid reading. It is easy to see that indeed I have triped over a true artist..... Hope you don't get to ill with my heaping it on.... But this is the truth the I am speaking.... Not the other.. In this short poem you have from the begining stroke painted a most vivid picture...and completed a fine delicate work........ Jim Troy
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the language is excellent as you have displayed your feelings in simple manner. i love this poem. keep it up. be simple in expressions as in this one