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Sonata For My Love

Who would have ever thought that life could be this beautiful?
In a gloomy world of mine someone had turned his way back
To the path I was walking, path of nothingness
Then we both had planted the nothingness
With smile that it became path of our sweet memory
Who would have ever thought that you’re the one?
The one that has been fated for being somebody in my days
Creating a bridge for me to walk to paradise of love
Then we both painted the way with love
It’s a simple sonata expressing my gratitude
For each miracle that you made me see
For each magic that I have believed in now
For a new day you had given me with love
Thank you for always being mine

Submitted: Saturday, April 24, 2010
Edited: Saturday, April 24, 2010


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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (5/24/2010 10:36:00 PM)

    hey i rated this one... very good! expressions, emotions, and other good things I can see in this poem... with 14 lines you said a thousand! nice write!

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