Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 32,720 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

I Am In Love - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

I am often so attracted,
Mesmerized and enchanted,
Having watched pretty things,
With magic in their wings,
Flying at human height,
Touching eyes like a light,
Getting inside very deep,
With a pleasant soul peep,
Then my eyes smile,
Making heart juvenile,
And I say to myself,
Put book in the shelf,
Watch beauty an' sacrifice,
Your self, may be nice,
I then sing like a dove,
I am now in love.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Love starts with attraction and its climax is self sacrifice.

Comments about I Am In Love by Akhtar Jawad

  • Freshman - 934 Points Leloudia Migdali (8/2/2015 5:14:00 PM)

    Such a beautiful romantic poem. I loved it! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/1/2015 6:02:00 AM)

    I am often so attracted,
    Mesmerized and enchanted................,
    Having watched pretty things,
    With magic in their wings, .. so lovely lines..10

    it is human nature
    that is vacant with hunger
    any thing that pours
    beauty is liked by............... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/1/2015 6:00:00 AM)

    I am often so attracted,
    Mesmerized and enchanted,
    Having watched pretty things,
    With magic in their wings, .. so lovely lines..10

    it is human nature
    that is vacant with hunger
    any thing that pours
    beauty is liked by............... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,428 Points Nyota Yasulwe (7/28/2015 5:28:00 AM)

    Being in love is a difficult feeling to express but you have managed in your poem! Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,069 Points Ayman Parray (7/27/2015 11:04:00 PM)

    Such a lovely poem sir. Makes me feel like a teenager again. If only self sacrifice was so easy. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,213 Points Joseph Dela Sulh (losembe) (7/26/2015 11:55:00 PM)

    My eyes smile...heart juvenile... I am now in love (with your poems) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,324 Points Kumarmani Mahakul (7/22/2015 4:49:00 AM)

    Very nicerly envisioned and aptly presented. Thrilling expression. A beautiful poem I like most. Thanks for sharing........10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 499 Points Folayemi Akande (7/22/2015 4:31:00 AM)

    I am in love with the eloquent hand that crafted this beautiful piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 210 Points Mohammad Muzzammil (6/28/2015 6:23:00 AM)

    fantastic imagery has been displayed with the twist of emotion. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,760 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (6/6/2015 3:42:00 PM)

    Loaded with love my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,747 Points Jaishree Nair (3/22/2015 10:59:00 PM)

    Nicely penned .thanks .really enjoyed reading (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 266 Points Farhan Mirza (1/3/2015 2:30:00 AM)

    This is really a perfect poem which is written perfectly. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,252 Points Khalid Saifullah (12/28/2014 5:37:00 PM)

    What a beautiful poem! ..................10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,614 Points Savita Tyagi (11/24/2014 5:11:00 PM)

    This is simply beautiful and a joy to read. So many little things are there to make us happy only if we let it come to us. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,874 Points Walterrean Salley (10/28/2014 4:44:00 AM)

    We should be grateful the beauty that surrounds us, filling our heart with inspiration. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,564 Points Paul Sebastian (10/16/2014 4:14:00 AM)

    I see your poem like this: Your eyes saw what they couldn't see and heart felt what it couldn't feel and suddenly your heart took flight, you are in love! A beautiful poem of one who feels young. Great write. Loved it. I am really amazed by the the way you write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/20/2014 5:30:00 AM)

    Love the magnet of heaven and you are utilizing..thanks (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,154 Points Charity Nduhiu (9/11/2014 4:36:00 AM)

    Very sweet poem keep up (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (7/3/2014 7:47:00 AM)

    being in love can be with many different things and different ways. A delightful poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,229 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/1/2014 11:47:00 AM)

    Fantastic write. I am just reading it again. Loved it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 13, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, April 25, 2014


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