The haze finally drifted away
Dispersed by a north easterly wind
Cool clean air now freshens the day
And things back to normal will begin
But dark clouds can be seen coming
In endless waves from the horizon
The sky broke with thunder rolling
Announcing the start of the monsoon
The haze replaced by pouring rain
And a blistering wind loudly moan
Rising water now adds to the pain
While the elements temper is shown
From the choking haze which is by man caused
Now torrential rain from nature runs full course
Beautiful poem with lovely images suggesting the transition from the cloudy haze to the torrential monsoon showers! Enjoyed much!
Verily, a warm welcome to the monsoon is well expressed.
Great imagery and nice feeling after reading your poem.........Awesome..10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a stunning nature poem Loke. The beginning of the monsoon that will soon cleanse mans pollution is penned so well.
Only for awhile then everything will be polluted again.