! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Sooop- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Sooop- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


Steaming broccoli soup,
Roasted garlic, chopped green chives;
Slurp, slurp, burp, burp, burp…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 17 May 2010

You have now reminded me of my tea time...great senryu serving

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Allemagne Roßmann 07 February 2010

Steaming broccoli soup Spaghetti bolognese smoke Eyes on eyes Slurp burp usurp yes no no yes Ohhhhh! brooch it fell on bombs in a brownie brioche bread drenched nights in red and white hoping to be mish for mash Lips smacking on mirror 20 past 3 and 40 past 8 Eyes still harping on missiles.............. Good write and attempt.....

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Reshma Ramesh 27 January 2010

yum...yum..............

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 03 January 2010

right from preparation to consumption and digestion in just three lines....delicious

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premji premji 30 December 2009

add a little bit of my heart too........

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