Sorrow Weeps Poem by chantel shoats

Sorrow Weeps

Rating: 5.0


sorrow weeps as sorrow holds
sorrow kills n wont let go.
seeing lies but all you see
that everthing is as its suppose to be.
u turn your head, close your eye
cover your ears, n try not to cry.
try not to blink cuz it will show
all the tears you been tryin to hold.
jus for now play along
keep goin as if nothins wrong.
but til u see that its a lie
get up n say good bye
for now is when u finally reallize
that its yours n not any ones life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Rhodes 09 December 2008

CHANTEL, BEAUTIFUL. LOTS OF INSIGHT AND WISDOM. YOU DO HAVE THE ABILLITY TO STEP OUTSIDE OF YOURSELF AND ANALYZE AND MAKE GOOD DECISIONS, IT SEEMS. THANK YOU. CAROL

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Elenore Elizabeth 09 May 2008

'jus for now play along keep goin as if nothins wrong. but til u see that its a lie get up n say good bye' fav. lines beautiful poem by the way chantel

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