Story Of My Life Poem by chantel shoats

Story Of My Life

Rating: 5.0


heres the story of my life!
all the wrongs and all the rights!
had no sisters only brothers!
we looked out for one another! !
me being the youngest i have to amit
4 me being 6, i went through alot of sh.t! !
got in fights wen i was ten
with nothin but boys that were my friends! !
by time i was 12 i moved away!
not that far but thats were my heart stayed!
lived in a place that was nice but not home! !
every night i felt more alone!
couple months later i met my bestfriend.
we made a promise we would be there til the end!
made it to 8th and it was boy was it fun! !
till i met a boy who i thought was the one! !
in one of my classes there he stood! !
not to classy but not to hood! !
sad to say, good freinds we came!
i had to except that he didnt feel the same! !
then one day i closed my eyes
he walked outta my life with no goodbyes! !
this seems so sad but yet so true
but read the rest in 'story of my life pt 2'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Rhodes 09 December 2008

CHANTEL, YOU ARE A POETESS IN THE MAKING. YOUR THOUGHTS FLOW EASILY AND EMOTIONALLY. VERY NICE. BE PATIENT, DON'T HURRY THE BONDING. GET TO KNOW YOURSELF, WHAT AND WHO YOU ARE, AND THEN, HOPEFULLY, THE RIGHT ONE YOU CHOOSE WILL BE COMPATIBLE AND TRUE. IT AIN'T AN EASY UNDERSTANDABLE 'ROAD', BY ANY MEANS. LOTS OF FALTERING ALONG THE WAY. THANK YOU FOR SHARING, CAROL

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